Still waiting for editing

Here I am, still don't have my book edited. An Unexpected Love

But here's the good thing. This last editor is amazing and pointed out some things I should change and some I should add. Mostly add. She said, 
"I want to know how you're feeling when he looks at you like that." 
"I want to resonate with Maggie. I want to be Maggie."

She also showed me how to show emotion in the other characters. And how to show and not tell. It's so much easier to tell. :)

I must say that I'm very happy with these changes and very glad I didn't publish it before. The characters are alive now.

We're on the last chapter and then have to do a review. I'm super excited to get it up on Kindle and to get a few copies from CreateSpace.

I've also had an optin box graphic created on Fiverr.

This is the first one the designer made.





I asked if he could give me a copy without the curlies. 

I like them both, but I can see using both. Now, I just have to find out how to upload them to my autoresponder account. Hopefully that will add the little boxes for name and email.

I have the website under way. Check it out at http://www.theunexpectedlove.com